第一次互评其他同学的作文，从他们的作文中学到了什么？一起分享一下吧~
To be honest, firstly, using as much as possible senior words is very useful. Sencondly, be care for the tunes. Thirdly, use the correct grammar. forthly, avoid Chinglish.
Totally agree.
Try to apply the useful expressions into writing.
OK， you are right!
It's a extraordinary experience. I can read the compotion written by others and learn something different. And through the evaluation. I know that to write a good composition firstly cammands a clear expression. It will leave a good inpression to others if you can experss your views clearly. Secondly, it's necessary for us to use some new learnt words and phrases. Eventually, foucus on the grammar! Don't make too many errors on the grammar.
They use many beautiful words and complex sentences in their article . Compared to my own, I realize what is my weakness. I will try my best to improve it in the following days.
看了大家的作文和互评过程，发现了一些注意事项，跟大家分享：
- 写作文之前不妨先看看老师提交的作文范例以及作文评分标准，按照老师的提示完成作文。发现很多同学忽略了老师精心准备的作文范例和评分标准。。。甚至遗憾。
- 在批改网输入作文号时确保输入正确！发现有同学因为输入错误的作文号，写错了题目。审题请细心点。
- 作文的提交要求是从批改网复制出来，贴到word文档上面，另存为PDF提交。审题请细心点。
- 自己的作文提交之前请务必打开该文档，确保文档正常显示。发现有个别同学的文档无法打开或者打开后是乱码的，导致无法获得来自同伴的评价。甚是可惜。
打开后是乱码的是因为他们直接在文件后面加上.pdf, 但是实际上有一个隐藏的扩展名为.docx或者.txt;
Reading and commenting on other people’s compositions makes me learn more good sentence patterns and know how to build a good structure.At the mean time, I can absorb others mistakes in order to make less mistakes. To improve the ability of writing,remarking on others articles is a excellent way as well.
Great！
Learn from your classmates' mistakes.
i agree with you very much.
To be honest, i find our classmates do a good job,especially Ming bowen.And i think i am supposed to improve my writing and expand vocabulary.
Would u mind attach Ming's composition here?
Reading others' article makes me know I have many errors and at the same time, I can absorb their excellent partern and use them skillfully.
To improve my writing skills, read articles more is such a good idea.
Everyone is excellent, however, there are some strange phrase collocation in their articles.Trying to be better is our vital job.
I can see the nice words and sentences written by others. Compared to my own, I still need to improve my writing level, add more exercises and accumulate vocabulary.
I realize that there’s still much that I can do on my vocabulary and writing skills. I should learn from others and improve my abilities.
Reading and making comments on other students' compositions is not a easy work. I need to analyze their structure, language, content and grammar. However, the progress is a good chance for me to discover some problems that may appear in mine.
Frankly speaking, there are a grammar mistakes in my composition which is the use if symbol','. Other people actually did good work. They use some excellent words such as perplex, puzzle. They also master skillful uses of sentence patterns.
To my surprise，others whose I evaluate the writings use plenty of advanced vocabulary and connected the sentence properly.I realize I should increase my vocabulary and improve the level of grammar.
It is a meaningful experience.Not only I have a chance to learn others writing skills,but also I can accumulate some great sentence pattern.Otherwise,from others essay,I also can aware my own faults.
To be frank, I learnt some advanced statements from this peer statement.In addition, I notice that I still have a lot of writting aspects to be improved.
Excited and thrilled.
It is a good chance for me to steal some good sentences. Don not blame me for my behaviors!
Well done!
You set a good example for all of us~
I think some mates' composition is deep. Especially grammar and vocabulary. I don't understand, so I don't dare to say anything.
This essay gives us a better understanding of the way we write and the grammar we can learn from others. It's great.
It is flattering to read so many great essays! Technically, the classmates whose essays are scored by me, are superior to me. I sinerely learned a lot from them.
I feel excited because I learn o lot of excellent expression
By mutual evaluation, I can harvest better sentence patterns to improve myself, from which I can learn much.
Be excited and gather much experence.
Emmm， what I get are some new words and some shinning phrases and attaching the vital importance to the organization of article. We should accumulate more to improve ourselves whatever from others or some classic book.
I learned a lot good expression and sentences, which will enrich my articles and make them more attractive. Apart form these, I also learned the lesson so that I wouldn't make the same mistakes as they do.
That is my first time to correcting the composition of other students. I learn saw a lot of mistakes that people would make.