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第一次互评其他同学的作文，从他们的作文中学到了什么？一起分享一下吧~

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Nothing to be honest

2017应用统计学(生物统计)王文涛 -

To be honest, firstly, using as much as possible senior words is very useful. Sencondly, be care for the tunes. Thirdly, use the correct grammar. forthly, avoid Chinglish.

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陈泽璇069058 -

Totally agree.

Try to apply the useful expressions into writing.

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2017应用统计学(生物统计)梁雪晴 -
It's a extraordinary experience. I can read the compotion written by others and learn something different. And through the evaluation. I know that to write a good composition firstly cammands a clear expression. It will leave a good inpression to others if you can experss your views clearly. Secondly, it's necessary for us to use some new learnt words and phrases. Eventually, foucus on the grammar! Don't make too many errors on the grammar.
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2017应用统计学(生物统计)李威仪 -
They use many beautiful words and complex sentences in their article . Compared to my own, I realize what is my weakness. I will try my best to improve it in the following days.
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陈泽璇069058 -

看了大家的作文和互评过程，发现了一些注意事项，跟大家分享：

  1. 写作文之前不妨先看看老师提交的作文范例以及作文评分标准，按照老师的提示完成作文。发现很多同学忽略了老师精心准备的作文范例和评分标准。。。甚至遗憾。
  2. 在批改网输入作文号时确保输入正确！发现有同学因为输入错误的作文号，写错了题目。审题请细心点。
  3. 作文的提交要求是从批改网复制出来，贴到word文档上面，另存为PDF提交。审题请细心点。
  4. 自己的作文提交之前请务必打开该文档，确保文档正常显示。发现有个别同学的文档无法打开或者打开后是乱码的，导致无法获得来自同伴的评价。甚是可惜。


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2017应用统计学(生物统计)杨梦雅 -
Reading and commenting on other people’s compositions makes me learn more good sentence patterns and know how to build a good structure.At the mean time, I can absorb others mistakes in order to make less mistakes. To improve the ability of writing,remarking on others articles is a excellent way as well.
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2017应用统计学(生物统计)陈金梅 -

To be honest, i find  our classmates do a good job,especially Ming bowen.And i think i am supposed to improve my writing and  expand vocabulary.

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2017应用统计学(生物统计)简杰锋 -
Reading others' article makes me know I have many errors and at the same time, I can absorb their excellent partern and use them skillfully. To improve my writing skills, read articles more is such a good idea.
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2017生物统计刘雅 -

Everyone is excellent, however, there are some strange phrase collocation in their articles.Trying to be better is our vital job.

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2017应用统计学(生物统计)麻李思雨 -
Reading and making comments on other students' compositions is not a easy work. I need to analyze their structure, language, content and grammar. However, the progress is a good chance for me to discover some problems that may appear in mine.
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2017应用统计学(生物统计)明博文 -
Frankly speaking, there are a grammar mistakes in my composition which is the use if symbol','. Other people actually did good work. They use some excellent words such as perplex, puzzle. They also master skillful uses of sentence patterns.
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2017应用统计学(生物统计)肖丽娜 -

To my surprise，others whose I evaluate the writings use plenty of advanced vocabulary and connected the sentence properly.I realize I should increase my vocabulary and improve the level of grammar.

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2017应用统计学(生物统计)李佳 -

It is a meaningful experience.Not only I have a chance to learn others writing skills,but also I can accumulate some great sentence pattern.Otherwise,from others essay,I also can aware my own faults.

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2017生物技术肖柱 -

I think some mates' composition is deep. Especially grammar and vocabulary. I don't understand, so I don't dare to say anything.

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2017生物技术马可 -
This essay gives us a better understanding of the way we write and the grammar we can learn from others. It's great.
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2017生物技术程江路 -

It is flattering to read so many great essays! Technically, the classmates whose essays are scored by  me, are superior to me. I sinerely learned a lot from them.

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2017生物技术姚俊杰 -
Emmm， what I get are some new words and some shinning phrases and attaching the vital importance to the organization of article. We should accumulate more to improve ourselves whatever from others or some classic book.
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曾月权 -

I learned a lot good expression and sentences, which will enrich my articles and make them more attractive. Apart form these, I also learned the lesson so that I wouldn't make the same mistakes as they do.

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2017生物技术邓志颖 -

That is my first time to correcting the composition of other students. I learn saw a lot of mistakes that people would make.